John the detective was riding in a Ferrari 575 GTC with the window down when he heard a scream up in a 5 story hotel. John jumped out of the car and ran to the third floor. A lady was punched in the stomach really hard. John started running and asked what happened.. She replied with a weak voice, “I lost two million dollars”. “That’s unbelievable”, replied John. John helped the lady stand up. John said, “I want you to explain everything to me”. “Okay,” replied Anne. “I walked in my room and a man ran in the room. I turned around and then he punched me in the stomach really hard”. “He grabbed two million dollars out of my wallet and ran off with out you seeing”. John replied and said, “that sounds pretty truthful.”

A few hours later the perpetrator went to the Prime Minister and gave him two million dollars for not paying at the right time. The Prime Minister had a chat with him about what he needed to pay next and if he paid all of that on time. Then he would get eight million dollars. The perpetrator gave a very evil smile and walked off.

The Prime Minister was really confused. “Why would Jack smile so weird when he has so much money?” The Prime Minister ran and stopped Jack and asked him a question. This made Jack really mad so Jack kicked the Prime Minister in the stomach and Jack ran off laughing. The Prime Minister was in a lot of pain.

John the detective asked Anne if she could explain this person. John wrote down the things she said and he asked her one more time to make sure. This time John got it all down.

John draws a picture from his description. He realises that its actually his brother. John was really confused because Jack is a celebrity. He should have lots of money but he remembered what happened last time. He damaged the Prime Ministers favourite window. It was a 2 million dollar window. John said, “now I just need to find him”.


John went out of the room and thought of an idea. “I’ll dress up in a disguise tomorrow and use a device catcher to catch bad people. This will be easy”.

The next day John dressed up in a disguise and used his electronic device to catch bad people for cops to use. The device showed a red dot on Tennyson street. John drove his car and made his car invisible and silent. He also made himself invisible and silent. He walked up to his brother and put the handcuffs around his hands behind his back. Jack got frightened and thought there was a ghost. He screamed and ran away.

John just ran after him and slowed him down. John put Jack in the car and rode off to the police station. “Is this the person you’re looking for?” asked John . The chief replied, “good job”.

Jack was arrested for two years and that taught him a lesson.

John drove his car to the Prime Minister and said, “that money Jack gave to you is not his money.” said John. “He got arrested for stealing two million dollars.” The Prime Minister was shocked. “I have to give the money back”. “No I’ll give it back” said John. “I know where that person lives”.

John gave the money back to Anne and she was glad. She gave John $500,000 she didn’t need.

Everything went back to normal, no more thieves and crooks for at least two years.

By Fuad Sedick